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doc: typographical fine tuning

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Jan Engelhardt 8 years ago
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  1. 4
      NEWS
  2. 2
      README
  3. 2
      TODO
  4. 2
      man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml
  5. 12
      man/systemd-gpt-auto-generator.xml
  6. 2
      man/systemd-networkd.service.xml
  7. 4
      man/systemd-nspawn.xml
  8. 2
      man/systemd-update-utmp.service.xml
  9. 6
      man/systemd.exec.xml
  10. 14
      man/systemd.link.xml
  11. 4
      man/systemd.network.xml

4
NEWS

@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 212:
on a partition to ignore it during automatic discovery.
* Two new GPT type UUIDs have been added for automatic root
partition discovery, for 32bit and 64bit ARM. This is not
partition discovery, for 32-bit and 64-bit ARM. This is not
particularly useful for discovering the root directory on
these architectures during bare-metal boots (since UEFI is
not common there), but still very useful to allow booting of
@ -769,7 +769,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 209:
* systemd-nspawn gained a new --personality= switch for
setting the kernel personality for the container. This is
useful when running a 32bit container on a 64bit host. A
useful when running a 32-bit container on a 64-bit host. A
similar option Personality= is now also available in service
units.

2
README

@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ REQUIREMENTS:
If systemd is compiled with libseccomp support on
architectures which do not use socketcall() and where seccomp
is supported (this effectively means x86-64 and ARM, but
excludes 32bit x86!), then nspawn will now install a
excludes 32-bit x86!), then nspawn will now install a
work-around seccomp filter that makes containers boot even
with audit being enabled. This works correctly only on kernels
3.14 and newer though. TL;DR: turn audit off, still.

2
TODO

@ -575,7 +575,7 @@ Features:
* support crash reporting operation modes (https://live.gnome.org/GnomeOS/Design/Whiteboards/ProblemReporting)
* default to actual 32bit PIDs, via /proc/sys/kernel/pid_max
* default to actual 32-bit PIDs, via /proc/sys/kernel/pid_max
* be able to specify a forced restart of service A where service B depends on, in case B
needs to be auto-respawned?

2
man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml

@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
reversed with <function>sd_bus_decode()</function>. It is
recommended to only use external identifiers here that generally
require little escaping to be turned into valid bus path
identifiers (for example by sticking to a 7bit ASCII character
identifiers (for example by sticking to a 7-bit ASCII character
set), in order to ensure the resulting bus path is still short and
easily processed.</para>

12
man/systemd-gpt-auto-generator.xml

@ -106,22 +106,22 @@
<row>
<entry>44479540-f297-41b2-9af7-d131d5f0458a</entry>
<entry><filename>Root Partition (x86)</filename></entry>
<entry>On 32bit x86 systems the first x86 root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory <filename>/</filename>.</entry>
<entry>On 32-bit x86 systems the first x86 root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory <filename>/</filename>.</entry>
</row>
<row>
<entry>4f68bce3-e8cd-4db1-96e7-fbcaf984b709</entry>
<entry><filename>Root Partition (x86-64)</filename></entry>
<entry>On 64bit x86 systems the first x86-64 root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory <filename>/</filename>.</entry>
<entry>On 64-bit x86 systems the first x86-64 root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory <filename>/</filename>.</entry>
</row>
<row>
<entry>69dad710-2ce4-4e3c-b16c-21a1d49abed3</entry>
<entry><filename>Root Partition (32bit ARM)</filename></entry>
<entry>On 32bit ARM systems the first ARM root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory <filename>/</filename>.</entry>
<entry><filename>Root Partition (32-bit ARM)</filename></entry>
<entry>On 32-bit ARM systems the first ARM root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory <filename>/</filename>.</entry>
</row>
<row>
<entry>b921b045-1df0-41c3-af44-4c6f280d3fae</entry>
<entry><filename>Root Partition (64bit ARM)</filename></entry>
<entry>On 64bit ARM systems the first ARM root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory <filename>/</filename>.</entry>
<entry><filename>Root Partition (64-bit ARM)</filename></entry>
<entry>On 64-bit ARM systems the first ARM root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory <filename>/</filename>.</entry>
</row>
<row>
<entry>933ac7e1-2eb4-4f13-b844-0e14e2aef915</entry>

2
man/systemd-networkd.service.xml

@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
<para>Network configurations applied before networkd is started
are not removed, and static configuration applied by networkd
is not removed when networkd exits. Dynamic configuration applied by
networkd may also optionally be left in place on shut-down. This ensures
networkd may also optionally be left in place on shutdown. This ensures
restarting networkd does not cut the network connection, and, in particular,
that it is safe to transition between the initrd and the real root,
and back.</para>

4
man/systemd-nspawn.xml

@ -221,7 +221,7 @@
<listitem><para>After transitioning
into the container, change to the
specified user defined in the
specified user-defined in the
container's user database. Like all
other systemd-nspawn features, this is
not a security feature and provides
@ -600,7 +600,7 @@
<literal>x86</literal> and
<literal>x86-64</literal> are
supported. This is useful when running
a 32bit container on a 64bit
a 32-bit container on a 64-bit
host. If this setting is not used
the personality reported in the
container is the same as the one

2
man/systemd-update-utmp.service.xml

@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
is a service that writes SysV runlevel changes to utmp
and wtmp, as well as the audit logs, as they
occur. <filename>systemd-update-utmp.service</filename>
does the same for system reboots and shut-down requests.</para>
does the same for system reboots and shutdown requests.</para>
</refsect1>
<refsect1>

6
man/systemd.exec.xml

@ -1204,7 +1204,7 @@
(which creates connected AF_UNIX
sockets only) are unaffected. Note
that this option has no effect on
32bit x86 and is ignored (but works
32-bit x86 and is ignored (but works
correctly on x86-64). If running in user
mode and this option is used,
<varname>NoNewPrivileges=yes</varname>
@ -1239,8 +1239,8 @@
processes. Takes one of
<constant>x86</constant> and
<constant>x86-64</constant>. This is
useful when running 32bit services on
a 64bit host system. If not specified
useful when running 32-bit services on
a 64-bit host system. If not specified
the personality is left unmodified and
thus reflects the personality of the
host system's

14
man/systemd.link.xml

@ -236,8 +236,8 @@
<listitem>
<para>The name is set based on entries in
the udev's Hardware Database with the key
<literal>ID_NET_NAME_FROM_DATABASE</literal>
.</para>
<literal>ID_NET_NAME_FROM_DATABASE</literal>.
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
@ -245,8 +245,8 @@
<listitem>
<para>The name is set based on information given by
the firmware for on-board devices, as exported by
the udev property <literal>ID_NET_NAME_ONBOARD</literal>
.</para>
the udev property <literal>ID_NET_NAME_ONBOARD</literal>.
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
@ -254,8 +254,8 @@
<listitem>
<para>The name is set based on information given by
the firmware for hot-plug devices, as exported by
the udev property <literal>ID_NET_NAME_SLOT</literal>
.</para>
the udev property <literal>ID_NET_NAME_SLOT</literal>.
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
@ -329,7 +329,7 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><literal>magic</literal></term>
<listitem>
<para>Wake on receipt of a magic packet
<para>Wake on receipt of a magic packet.
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>

4
man/systemd.network.xml

@ -272,8 +272,8 @@
<term><varname>Broadcast=</varname></term>
<listitem>
<para>The broadcast address, which must be in the format described in
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>inet_pton</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>
. This key only applies to IPv4 addresses. If it is not given, it is
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>inet_pton</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>.
This key only applies to IPv4 addresses. If it is not given, it is
derived from the <literal>Address</literal> key.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>

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