More template polishing.

r6508

debian/changelog

@@ -10,6 +10,8 @@ netcfg (0.35) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
     - English fixes.
   * Kenshi Muto
     - Update Japanese translation (ja.po)
+  * Oliver Elphick
+    - More template polishing.
 
  -- Gaudenz Steinlin <gaudenz@soziologie.ch>  Fri, 12 Dec 2003 11:01:44 +0100
 

debian/netcfg-common.templates

@@ -57,8 +57,8 @@ _Description: Invalid hostname
  The name "${hostname}" is invalid.
  .
  A valid hostname may contain only alphanumeric characters and the minus
- sign, be between 2 and 63 characters long, and cannot begin or end with a
- minus sign.
+ sign. If must be between 2 and 63 characters long, and may not begin or
+ end with a minus sign.
 
 Template: netcfg/error
 Type: error
@@ -72,8 +72,8 @@ _Description: No network interfaces detected
  No network interfaces were found. The installation
  system was unable to find a network device. 
  .
- You may need to load a specific module for your network card, if you really
- own one. For this, go back to the network hardware detection step.
+ You may need to load a specific module for your network card, if you have
+ one. For this, go back to the network hardware detection step.
 
 Template: netcfg/internal-none
 Type: text
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ _Description: Serial-line IP
 
 Template: netcfg/internal-plip
 Type: text
-_Description: Parallel-line IP
+_Description: Parallel-port IP
 
 Template: netcfg/internal-ppp
 Type: text

debian/netcfg-dhcp.templates

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Type: boolean
 Default: false
 _Description: Do you want to retry DHCP network configuration?
  No IP address was offered during DHCP network configuration.  DHCP servers
- are sometimes really slow. In this case you can retry.
+ are sometimes really slow. If you wish, you can retry.
 
 Template: netcfg/dhcp-title
 Type: text